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Surrender

“In ignorance we imagine we’re the doer ~ As yet entertaining delusions of grandeur” ~ quote by poet Each heartbeat’s impulsed by God but strangely yet we’re not awed, taking this gift for granted; by our daydreams, enchanted. The thoughts we think, in a blink occurs solely since we link our soul with the universe, that patterns our rhythmic verse. There’s nothing that we control but we can choose to patrol thoughts that arise and subside, using conscience as our guide. Mindful eye, ever alert, in staid silence does invert polarity of presence; one with God’s omnipresence. What’s silence but surrender, trusting life’s wondrous splendour, to enable body-mind leaving volition behind? With thoughts rested, ego dies, whereupon we touch new highs, propelled by bliss magnetism, enlivening body prism. Ego’s our identity, that scars soul’s serenity and surrender is the cure, that soul’s ascent does ensure. Choosing thus to step aside, free from fear, we wingless glide, being to become the flame, that may be assigned no name. 08-April-2023 ___________ Writing Challenge - 'S' Words, Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France HMS, Rhymezone, PS Grammar

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Date: 4/13/2023 5:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win in the Contest...Unseeking
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Date: 4/12/2023 5:23:00 PM
"...being to become the flame..." - awesome. A lovely spiritual write. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 4/13/2023 4:05:00 AM
Thank you, Linda dear ~
Date: 4/12/2023 1:23:00 PM
Congratulations, US. Your wonderful poetry left a comforting impression on me. Your win is largely deserved.
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Date: 4/13/2023 4:05:00 AM
Thank you, dear SP :)
Date: 4/12/2023 10:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A powerful/lovely~~ write/quote. Love It. You always make us think. A good thing. Have a blessed day writing away.............
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Date: 4/13/2023 4:04:00 AM
So happy you liked this one, dear Paula ~ hope you are doing well
Date: 4/12/2023 10:14:00 AM
Seeker, thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge, love your quote, congratulations 1
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Date: 4/13/2023 4:03:00 AM
So delighted you found this suitable for a placement, dear Constance ~ big effort on your part hosting contests for all of us here on PS
Date: 4/12/2023 10:07:00 AM
- Congratulations on 1st place in the contest ... lovely written, U.S. - hugs
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Date: 4/13/2023 4:02:00 AM
Thank you, dear Sunshine Smile

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