Get Your Premium Membership

Sunset Scene

Setting sun carved a path over the Humber From Hessle right across the river bend To join the banks at Ferriby Foreshore Where that path came to its end. The great smelter chimney Rising there darkly up high Sent its stream of carcinogenic smoke Crawling across the reddening sky. The resident old transvestite man, Beach combing the bank for wood Let the small boat he pulled drift so it Crossed the path from where I stood. To my rear the Bridge dominated Striding the river from side to side Then the longest in the world With its span totalling a mile wide. That strange mixture of past and present Not there to be seen anymore For the smelter was pulled down And taken to pollute a foreign shore; And the old man in his strange garb? Not even sure if he’s still here. I’ve not walked that old path For far too many years. But the bridge, now second biggest, Still spans the waterway Carrying the road’s traffic Day after day after day. A hush in the gathering darkness. Fading to silence bird song. And as the sun lowered to earth My scarlet path was gone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/23/2022 2:56:00 AM
Your imagery is as glorious as that of Coleridge and he is my favorite poet. "Sent its stream of carcinogenic smoke Crawling across the reddening sky." Wow!
Login to Reply
Ireland Avatar
Terry Ireland
Date: 12/23/2022 3:11:00 AM
I think you are too kind Caren, but thank you. They found clusters of Child Leukemia along the prevalent wind flow. When the company closed they dug down more than 2 metres to move contaminated soil. The findings are still classified
Date: 12/21/2022 3:52:00 PM
Very good poem with great imagery and word usage. So good from start to finish. John
Login to Reply
Ireland Avatar
Terry Ireland
Date: 12/22/2022 1:34:00 AM
Thanks John. The smelter chimney has now long gone ( they took their pollution to South America) and it's a more peaceful scene now. Terry

Book: Reflection on the Important Things