Sunrise

the morning sunrise God’s splendor wakes up the world freshness unequaled

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Date: 7/16/2009 11:43:00 AM

Amen! What an uplifting message in this poem. Blessings to you for sharing it. Thank you for the kind words on my poem. Hope you are having a good day. Karen

Misty Penton-Leccese

Date: 6/18/2009 12:43:00 PM

This makes me think of all those sunrises back home. They were no less than breathtaking. Wonderfully written. Lots of Love, Misty

Didi Oguejiofor

Date: 6/1/2009 10:03:00 AM

everyday is a gift from God and this haiku is lovely ;)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/30/2009 1:04:00 AM

such truth you speak in your haiku--very nice!

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/26/2009 12:35:00 PM

I am just sorry for the unawakened, they don't know what they are missing ... then again they perhaps would not recognize the blessing ... right on, sir poet!

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 5/26/2009 8:00:00 AM

Beautiful Michael. Thank you for filling my eyes with the splendor of your outstanding art. You are always a pleasure to visit and read. :) Blessings and love my friend.

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/26/2009 7:04:00 AM

So beautiful.....aren't these early summer mornings in the north state wonderful !!!!??? Love this...Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/26/2009 6:50:00 AM

Every morning reveals a new day, a new hope. This is the morning to me. So beautiful. Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/26/2009 5:09:00 AM

The second line is very deep..good haiku.

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/25/2009 11:46:00 PM

Thanks for supporting my contest Michael...Raul