Sunday Lightrays-Haiku

Early Sunday, sweet. Pinwheel, still,birds eat their treats. Cats fight, Sunday's meet. 4/11/2021 ~4~ Rhymed Haiku

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/12/2021 6:40:00 AM

The silence of the morn interrupted by cats fighting over territory. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/12/2021 1:43:00 PM

I like the way you put that, Tom. Pangie xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/11/2021 1:31:00 PM

Sweet Haiku. I have a couple pinwheels in my yard. The birds are all about today and the Robin have arrived. I hope you have a nice evening :)

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/11/2021 2:36:00 PM

Have 2 huge one on my deck. One huge one in frond yard. Have not seen seen many.birds Peace.. Pangiw