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Sun Loaded Juices

Small sour waits for ripening sun, soaking up warm rays 'til plum coloured sweet upon the tongue. Plum coloured sweet upon the tongue merry mixed with old and young naked feet, then danced upon. Young naked feet then danced upon sweetness ripened by the sun. Loaded juices run and run. Sun loaded juices run and run lazy sleeping until one day long mellow pouring done. One day long mellow pouring done to gather all for that one first noble tasting on the tongue.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/6/2012 4:23:00 AM
Diana it is beautiful written, bravo. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/6/2012 1:58:00 AM
Diana count me in for the taste test..David
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