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Sun Beating Down

Sun beating down, desert bleaching hot Flowers are bowing their heads wilting, While I water my backyard garden plot Sun beating down, desert bleaching hot, I am thinking “what God hath wrought” The birds and butterflies are lazily lilting Flowers are bowing their heads, wilting, Sun beating down, desert bleaching hot. I am thinking “what God hath wrought” Neither hot nor cold seems gratifying While I water my backyard garden plot, I am thinking “what God hath wrought” Sun beating down, desert bleaching hot True, it seems that no way is satisfying, I am thinking “what God hath wrought” Neither hot nor cold seems gratifying.
Written July 3, 2022 [a modified, linked Triolet]

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Date: 7/6/2022 2:11:00 AM
Loved the consistency Hank.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/6/2022 9:23:00 AM
Thanks so much, Caren. It's really hot here!
Date: 7/3/2022 11:23:00 AM
I understand this one! We are laying low, inside, enjoying the a/c, and waiting for late in the afternoon...
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/3/2022 11:35:00 AM
It's a sizzler here today. Great day for laying in with a/c.

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