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Summer Summer it is here Summer Summer lets go cheer Summer Summer Jump in the air Summer Summer it is here

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/4/2019 8:17:00 AM
This started out strong "I'm just the pieces of the person I used to be" that line pulls in the reader. I think you've got some great thoughts here. The layout could be cleaned up to make it read easier. Well done on getting these thoughts wrote, these are the foundations to great poetry.
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Date: 11/4/2019 8:09:00 AM
Fun and bubbly this sounds. ;)
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