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Sullied Threads From Yesterdays

There's a pile of sullied threads on the floor from muddied quarrels of our yesterdays Remnants of life that we stripped bare like sheets from a bed needing laundering It's a hoard of soiled and frayed toggeries too foul from words to be properly cleansed I thought of trying to bury the lot of it but shoveling the hurt left blisters on my hands Invasive memories haunt many of my dreams They are suffused deep within my thoughts An inured scent of us will linger, unbleached, abused like worn jeans as long as they remain unwashed How long before I can ignore them lying there gathered and rumpled in an alcove in my mind Dark stains that only bring me pain and discontent Too tainted to be purified by dirty human hands

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Date: 7/24/2024 1:11:00 PM
Lin, this is a fascinating poem. I am one who suffers from thoughts that stem from unresolved past hurt, and which just seem to arise more often than I would like. Recently, I have spent a lot of time discussing some things with friends and through thinking on my own to see if I can understand how to resolve this phenomenon. It takes a lot of adjustment as to how I think about the course of my life and how I can make the best of the time I have left on this planet. It seems to help to expose/wash the laundry as much as possible.
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Date: 7/24/2024 1:23:00 PM
Duke, put unresolved, negative thoughts through the ringer with bleach as often as you need to do it. Don't live with dirty laundry... the past cannot be changed, but tomorrow is ours to live as best we see fit. Don't live with regrets, Duke. They weigh us down as heavily as if an albatross is slung around our necks. Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts on this one. I also find writing cathartic.
Date: 7/20/2024 4:13:00 AM
A metaphoric masterclass Lin, with adept usage of the English language, a poets poem for sure, sometimes it’s best to leave well alone for fear of resurrecting old wounds, your final line is about as profound as profound can go, A superb piece, with so much baggage expressed, cheers David
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/20/2024 5:02:00 AM
Welcome back hugs, David and merci, merci for reading this one. Your comments are always encouraging and supportive of my poetry and it's greatly valued.
Date: 7/19/2024 11:36:00 PM
Sad and filled with melancholy, I am more sad that people do not recognize true poetry at its best. :)
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/20/2024 2:56:00 AM
Thank you, Art but if no one reads me or leaves a comment, I'd still write.
Date: 7/19/2024 3:22:00 PM
Great metaphors! Love It's a hoard of soiled and frayed toggeries.
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/19/2024 4:59:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Kim.

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