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Succesive Septimal-The Circus Is Fun

Need to laugh? Watch a clown's face! Elephants's strategy... dust! Come out now, slim jugglers... fun! Trapezes swing... couple making stunts! Baby's eyes look too scared... lion! Small monkeys jump and play... cheer! Fast stallions excite crowd... glee! All come out to thank them... glad! Copyright 2009 by Andrew Crisci

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Date: 6/25/2009 11:58:00 AM

Creative series here. You took the form to a whole new level. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Brian Strand

Date: 6/25/2009 8:58:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Andrew.Rgds Brian

Sajdah Al-Riyami

Date: 6/21/2009 11:26:00 AM

Thanx Brilliant dude!A Terrif Write=) I Love the Imagery.Take Me to the circus Of Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaagic*.* And the emotions at the end of the stanza is smart-->Gone 2 my favs=p

Brian Strand

Date: 6/19/2009 7:24:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Andrew.Rgds Brian