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Stuck Inside the Eye of the Storm

I was stuck inside the eye of the storm. No shelter nor blanket could keep me warm. I knew not how to rescue myself from distress, only how to keep living a life such a mess. I was depressed and alone, I must confess. I surrounded my mind with thoughts of pain, then only scars on my heart did remain. No matter the day or week I was down and out, and I shared nothing with my soul except doubt. I would take out pillows and in them would shout. Medication trials for years without darn relief, and that insecurity and shame was my thief. I laid in bed for days without showering or food, for I guess I just couldn’t get in a good mood. I wore nothing in my soul except a negative attitude. So here I am now almost ten years later in life, I am healthy and happy being a good mom and wife. I see how mental illness stole my sister from me, and I definitely know it is her I do not wish to be. I am moderately safe inside my essence so free. The I of the Storm Contest Maureen McGreavy November 25, 2018

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Date: 11/25/2018 9:32:00 PM
Wonderful poetry. Alive and strong words shared.
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Date: 11/25/2018 4:17:00 PM
Awesome write! Those AABBB quintains are hard to keep cohesive sounding and meaningful at the same time so it was impressive to see. Best of luck in the contest, I suspect this will land on the podium
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Date: 11/25/2018 1:13:00 PM
Wow!! That was deep!! Well written!
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