Street Person

I was speeding down the e-way in my Chevy pick-up truck,
When I spied a person laying there and I feared that she’d been struck.

Her body was splayed spread eagle out in the middle of the road,
And people blared their horns at her as traffic around her flowed.

I pulled onto the shoulder then sprinted to lend her aid,
I scooped her up in my arms and we together prayed.

Her clothes were old and greasy and her hands were stained with dirt, 
I told her I’d get her to the hospital and asked her where it hurt?

But with her fist she struck me in the face like we were in a fight,
Then she jumped over the retaining fence and disappeared into the night.

Now I ask myself a question that is always nagging me,
Did I save a life that night or just prolong her agony?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 10/26/2011 9:24:00 AM
Wow you are good x
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Date: 10/24/2011 7:34:00 PM
Only a brave person would run out into traffic to safe another. I have just posted a poem called 'The Secret' You last two lines brought it back to me. This is a very meaningful tale...Margaret
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Date: 10/24/2011 6:31:00 PM
The answer to all your questions is yes ;)~N
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Date: 10/24/2011 4:23:00 PM
Very deep stuff mate, some of us do want to die, bit of a twist in the tail hey... different view here....on ya mate...
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Date: 10/24/2011 2:59:00 PM
Wow! Nasty femme, how do you come up with these "way out" topics? A cool write.
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Tony Lane
Date: 10/24/2011 3:10:00 PM
This is a true story just as written. I didn't need to make it up. Tony
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