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"Streams of Gold, Blazing Andromedas" Engagement came at a cost the written word read and worn like a purple robe to keep out the cold stave the hunger off, feed the soul eveything, Everything, is what it wants, silky words like feathers tickle the closed throat, the lips open the kisses like envelopes eternal sweet plumbs, like losengers in a glass swear jar too many now, innumerable, judged and fined, selected and sucked unreasonably for some kind longevity, the life, for all it's worth, in treacherous weather, sometimes flounders, pauses for a while looking upwards towards an empty sky searching and waiting, for far away lost gods, then uncomfortably dressed, the robe, loosened, like a pagan, the written word read and worn on the outside like a purple cross, the stars glittering in reflective windows, the view immeasurable, the external shell disgarded and dropped at the feet of absent minded causes, the reviews smile like wolves lost, they're missing the red hoods, they're missing the real treasure, the deep buried plot the naked pleasure of walking away graces a certain freedom priceless, like rare diamonds entwined with diamantes, who can tell the difference now? twinkling like blazing andromedas at the distant edge of their worlds Engagement locked in at a cost fresh water pearls au natural, nothing false here, the kintsugi veins glow lux vitae in fig leaf stories a naked life shining, seen running in broken streams of gold the missing Page left opening marked unopened books, walks like a lost adventurer through stories that arrive on leaves (LadyLabyrinth / 2023)

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Date: 8/21/2023 2:52:00 PM
Upon awaking this morning ;), two interesting articles I came across after writing "Rivers of Gold, Blazing Andromedas"; totally unrelated to the poem here, but then again ....
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/21/2023 3:09:00 PM
https://www.helpingwritersbecomeauthors.com/how-to-rediscover-the-joy-of-writing/
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/21/2023 2:52:00 PM
https://www.helpingwritersbecomeauthors.com/the-two-halves-of-the-third-plot-point-2/
Date: 8/21/2023 1:40:00 PM
Wonderful pictures for a wonderful write/story. Have a blessed/great day.............
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/21/2023 2:47:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 8/21/2023 6:04:00 AM
My friend this is a wondrously fine masterpiece of your great poetry.""fresh water pearls au natural, nothing false here, the kintsugi veins glow lux vitae in fig leaf stories a naked life shining, seen running in broken streams of gold the missing Page left opening marked unopened books, walks like a lost adventurer through stories that arrive on leaves". Brilliant ending,, A fav..
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/21/2023 2:47:00 PM
Thank you.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/21/2023 6:06:00 AM
The entire poem was a deep and true pleasure to read and comprehend so many factors! A true gem it tis.. God bless...
Date: 8/21/2023 5:20:00 AM
"Unfinished Symphony"/Massive Attack
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/21/2023 5:20:00 AM
https://youtu.be/oWohPJHicFE?si=vySt0xMH4yVOEyxz

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