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Stepping Into the Temple

I step into the temple in search of painted dreams Figures wrapped in irresistible shine they come to life within their fresco prisons A kaleidoscope of painted saints powerless to answer the prayers of mortals I sit in my darkest hope and worry breathing in God’s unfathomable presence I search for calm in my ever present discontent while feeling habitually ignored I meet the smiles written within ancient ink those previous joys that I long to encounter I see cross stations occupied by crowds as they wait to exhale the aroma of their indifference They dive into the oblivion of deceptive joy Each one grabs at feelings of fulfillment and freedom served from the Alter of Hope “Bless you my Child” “Take this” “Eat this” dreamers longing to ingest the Son They sense the shortness of their time within life’s space. Afterwards we will share the peace At small tables we will gather There we will talk about the destiny of everything We will pluck meaning from articles written in magazines a new kind of glossy poverty that rises from the sobs of first class paper We will transform the meaningless into prophecies while starring into the bottom of empty coffee cups Meanwhile closed bibles remain close at hand ever present symbols of our pretentious piety We will quiver at our amazing predictions following the flow of feelings with a sigh Top shelf thoughts of our greatness repopulating volumes of forgotten pages Or will we faithfully wait for encounters with pilgrims? Will we find depth in our yearnings? Is the King’s Garden overgrown with our opulence? He will not be infected by the limitation of our imagination! Let us open the eternal book gaze upon the Kingdom in the clouds Let’s taste unimaginable daring “Why is there something at all, rather than nothing?” Enquire men of mud, occupy your shine be enlightened by your true courage Yes, choose to touch the untouchable secrets of God! For Tania Kitchen’s Trophy Worthy Contest. It’s hard to tell you why my poem is trophy worthy because it feels like bragging. For me this piece deals with our humanity and our tentative relationship with God and the sacred. I feel the imagery connects to the past and the future. As humans we want to belong yet we struggle against the essence of who we are. I feel this portrays our conflict and still their is a hint of resolution. I hope you enjoy reading it. Ironically this was written on April 1st 2019.

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Date: 8/11/2019 7:09:00 PM
It's almost as if the wisest thing we can do is recognize our own foolishness and the source of true wisdom. Thanks for sharing.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/12/2019 8:26:00 AM
So true Jim.
Date: 5/11/2019 3:44:00 PM
Powerful! The writing blends well. So many memorable and eye opening verses. It shines as a Star!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/15/2019 8:40:00 AM
Thanks my poetic brother.
Date: 5/5/2019 8:22:00 AM
WOw! Rich! Just wow! I no longer consider myself a Roman Catholic. My religion in fact is philosophy to me a more meaningful faith . . . not to say I don't believe in God! I believe in mine and also I believe in Jesus Christ a man of His own Faith! This I find enough, up to now, to sustain my beliefs . . hopefully God will allow me answers as he sees fit, during the remainder of my life and perhaps beyond . . . a very worthwhile piece Rich and thanks for guiding me here!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/15/2019 8:40:00 AM
It seems I missed a few responses on this piece. This is a very thoughtful one. How is your book coming?
Date: 4/16/2019 5:06:00 PM
What I take or actually Love about The Great Religion's are the Cathedrals, Mosque and Synagogue The Sanctity Inside Like you said or wrote Richard Once you Step Inside You are at 1 Peace and God are Inside
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/24/2019 9:54:00 AM
Thanks for the visit Christopher.
Date: 4/12/2019 9:07:00 PM
Wow! This is powerful. Both old and New Testaments are awesome works. Love that line...enquire men of mud Panagiota
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/14/2019 8:05:00 AM
Thanks for reading this one.
Date: 4/7/2019 5:10:00 PM
Just dropped by again... just WOW very colorful and imaginative.. I can feel as though I'm actually walking in the presence tense of this verse... I am there Wonderful!!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/8/2019 8:36:00 AM
Thanks so much James.
Date: 4/4/2019 12:04:00 AM
Sumptuous poetry. Fave.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/4/2019 8:25:00 AM
Thanks Lawrence.
Date: 4/3/2019 7:23:00 PM
enlightening work so timely for easter... and a very fine team-up, rich!... much enjoyed!..huggs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/3/2019 8:42:00 PM
Thanks Nette, hugs Rick.
Date: 4/3/2019 2:47:00 PM
A powerful verse Richard, great collaboration that you and Petar have written. I hope you are we'll. Tom.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/3/2019 8:43:00 PM
Thanks Tom, I was inspired by reading his poem.
Date: 4/3/2019 10:28:00 AM
Powerful and beautiful. From the cynical to the divine! A fav for me.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/3/2019 12:02:00 PM
Thanks my friend.
Date: 4/3/2019 10:20:00 AM
A good lesson for us all. Very well done.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/3/2019 10:21:00 AM
Thanks David.

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