Steering Kite

steering kite high among clouds ~ summer days dwindling AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on April 15, 2018

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Kyle Kriticos

Date: 4/17/2018 8:11:00 PM

I really liked this. You are truly mastering the art of Hai Ku if I do say so myself!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/17/2018 9:36:00 PM

Thanks, Kyle. Apparently you never master Haiku, it's just fun trying.

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 4/16/2018 2:16:00 PM

Awesome haiku. Very sharp images. And so modern!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/16/2018 2:36:00 PM

Thank you, Dale, I hope most people realize the quotation marks were implied on that second line. LOL

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/16/2018 10:15:00 AM

Imagery that sizzles. Lovely done. xomo

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/16/2018 2:39:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit, Maureen.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/16/2018 4:08:00 AM

I do love late summer as it creeps into autumn.Lovely hakiu Line. Tom.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/16/2018 9:11:00 AM

A lovely and very distant memory. Thank you so much for your lovely visit, Tom.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 4/16/2018 3:31:00 AM

Lovely imagery... I enjoyed this cute haiku...

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/16/2018 9:11:00 AM

Thank you, Supraja.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/16/2018 3:30:00 AM

:) Another good haiku, Line. I'm glad you can write haiku so well. Dwindling summer days might not make many happy, but I don't like the heat and the humidity that summer brings...at least in my part of the world. Hugs

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/16/2018 9:11:00 AM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Eileen. Much appreciated.