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Stayed At Home Instead

Stayed at Home Instead For a while in salt water we would splash After that lay down and start to crash End up dreaming of the many things Which to us joy and happiness brings. Then we later had to leave the beach Pelicans and seagulls as they screech Waves forming and into shore did flow When wind built up and started to blow. Raining hectically had been outside again Where all our patience was wearing thin Wanting it to be sunny and nice and warm And we were just affected by a big storm. Weather and wind finally settled down And it was then that we all went to town To drink and dance at a beloved bar But before we left someone clobber our car. My moral I am stating and making is Boiling down and amounting to this This very poem you should have read Laid down and stayed at home instead. James Thomas Horn, Retired Veteran

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Date: 4/28/2015 7:22:00 AM
nicely written. I often read your things in the emails and don't comment here. But I really should put it here instead. If i do have a comment to give. Good job my friend
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James Horn
Date: 4/28/2015 8:31:00 PM
Bonnie, How do you end up finding my poems. Hope you don't mind me including you on my emails to poets emails. I consider you as being part of my exclusive group. Jim
Date: 4/26/2015 5:31:00 PM
enjoyed your write James, i thank you for your service to our country:)
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James Horn
Date: 4/27/2015 9:18:00 AM
Hope everyone is enjoying my poems as much as I enjoy writing them. Jim

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