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Stars in Eyes

stars in eyes two brothers nay, friends hugging accordion bellowing the preacher waltzing the friends hurraying celebratory partying in old westward ho old-fashioned merrymaking without all the noise of the media a tiny huddle of villagers in dim light do stars guarantee a brighter camaraderie?

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Date: 11/11/2024 2:13:00 PM
Nice poem! I guess nobody has improved on starlight for lighting up a night sky!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2024 3:20:00 PM
They really haven’t! LOL
Date: 11/8/2024 6:47:00 PM
Very creative! They're dancing with the stars, either way- ! :D
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2024 7:30:00 AM
Thank you, Paige and love how you worded that :)
Date: 11/8/2024 12:20:00 PM
Sounds great with good old fashioned fun!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2024 7:31:00 AM
We could all use it! Put away these phones, tablets etc.. and take up a jig :)
Date: 11/6/2024 8:31:00 AM
Hi Kim, sounds like my kind of party.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2024 8:52:00 AM
Thanks, John :)

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