Stardust

Angels flapped their wings Stardust fell from blessed sky Poetry flourished! © Demetrios Trifiatis 21 OCTOBER 2014

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Gene Bourne

Date: 10/24/2014 1:24:00 AM

Flowing, beautiful composing....Look forward to reading more...Your PS friend...Gene.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/24/2014 7:21:00 AM

Welcome my young friend! Thank you for visiting and commenting in such a gentle way!

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/22/2014 4:07:00 PM

A wonderful Haiku here Demetrios!! So this is the source from whence "Poetry" flourished. It does make entire sense. So few words, but their force and power are quite obvious!! A "7" Sir. Your mastery of types writes along with the Epigrams is quite superb. I can tell you've done so much great writing over the years!! And, I've FAV'd this one too!! Cheers and Spill Ink!! Gary

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/24/2014 7:24:00 AM

Danke mein guter freund, Gary, for your visit and so generous comment and grading!

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/21/2014 3:52:00 PM

wonderful! i love that image

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/24/2014 7:22:00 AM

Thank you, Casarah, I am certain you do!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/21/2014 2:56:00 PM

This is an absolutely magical write! Stardust is mystical and a touch is all we need to give birth to great poetry! Beautiful piece, Demetrios! Pandita

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/21/2014 2:59:00 PM

Welcome, Pandita! Thank you for your gracious visit and comment!