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Spring's Bestowing

No longer snowing The sun is glowing The rains ongoing Daffodils growing Crows crowing Winds blowing Rivers overflowing Children helloing Frisbee throwing Much more outgoing Farmers ready for sowing Gardeners hoeing Neighbors easygoing All soon will be lawn mowing AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on March 8, 2018

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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/9/2018 8:09:00 AM
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Clever, fun and a blast to read. Though you used brevity (one of my fav things), strong imagery was delivered. All the best in contest and all else ... CayCay
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/9/2018 12:43:00 PM
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Oh, but brevity is most effective when used as you have, please don't think I meant your poem was 'lacking' for in no way would that be true. If you wish a re-write, by all means, but I meant the poem was strong in imagery, as well stance. We okay?
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/9/2018 11:48:00 AM
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Yes, I know very brief. I might come up with a replacement for the contest, we'll see. Thanks for your visit and kind comment.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/8/2018 12:59:00 PM
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Lovely monorhyme Line Good luck
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/8/2018 2:38:00 PM
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Thanks for your visit and comment, Tom. Much appreciated.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/8/2018 12:41:00 PM
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You describe the region where I live perfectly; I am thinking you are from the Midwest, which delights me somehow. Nice job!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/8/2018 12:47:00 PM
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Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren. I'm from Ottawa, Canada.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/8/2018 11:55:00 AM
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Great Monorhyme! Well done :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/8/2018 12:41:00 PM
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Thanks for your visit and comment, Heidi.

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