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Spring Freedom

a teeny tiny mouse shyly skitters among the crisp-dried leaves and deadfall the teeny tiny mouse believes that Spring has sprung to free him from his burrow when fragrant flowers rise with soaring sleepy heads teeny tiny mouse snuffles as jasmine entices teeny tiny mouse to run free and scurry through the fields

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/19/2023 9:46:00 PM

Great imagery, Linda:)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/20/2023 6:19:00 AM

Thank you for your kindness Jo! :)

Speaks Volumes

Date: 2/19/2023 6:13:00 PM

Lovely Linda, I adore Jasmine and feel like that little mouse does when its in full bloom. Delightful poem. Enjoyed reading it so much

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/19/2023 7:14:00 PM

My vines are awesome this year - so full of blooms. I love it! I'm glad you like them, and the tiny little mouse lovin' them too. :) Thanks for stopping by!

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/19/2023 8:05:00 AM

Great one. Well done :)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/19/2023 8:12:00 AM

Thanks Heidi!