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Spontaneity

The vibrancy of the rich hued kaleidoscope Across the firmament, Wide open eyes ~ a pantomime unexpected A child’s innocent smile Free from taint and defilement Touching its cheeks with a lot of fondness~ an involuntary reaction An old man’s fragile hand When stretched, Penetrating hands into pockets for extending alms ~ an impetuous action A sudden meet of my teacher on the way Palms come together and go folded Making a traditional Namaskar~ an untaught response When passing by temple Stop for a while; Closing eyelids to recall His image~ an effortless doing The solemn tune of the national anthem Stop all at once and Rising to feet to pay respect~ an impulsive gesture Spontaneity delineates a man’s character It reveals the real tendency of man Intuitive and insightful learning, Selfless love and unprejudiced cogitation Steer our actions in an agreeable manner Introspection about our spontaneous actions Furnish space to learn and examine our traits. Place : 10th

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Date: 3/7/2024 3:57:00 PM
So well expressed. Congratulations on being in the top 10 of this premier contest.
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Date: 3/12/2024 1:52:00 AM
Thanks a lot for the best compliments.
Date: 3/7/2024 12:21:00 PM
Wonderful exploration of the line of inquiry, Patri! Congratulations on your win! Blessings!
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 3/12/2024 1:52:00 AM
Thank you so much for the best compliments.
Date: 3/7/2024 12:10:00 AM
Congratulations dear poet on a win and high placement in the contest!
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Date: 3/12/2024 1:51:00 AM
Thank you so much for your best compliments

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