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Space, Version 2

Between the ears of the greatest minds Limits and laws do not exist Building roads and wrinkles to beyond Such brains are ripe with fascination Where physical boundaries do not factor Journeymen and women discover frontiers within themselves Forming the legendary, from the amorphous They are contemplative, they are reminiscent Tireless and motivated I am just a rubbernecker Watching treasures without obstacles, by accident Eventually I choose to give them their space Smiling back at them, they are our children

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Date: 2/2/2014 5:41:00 AM
This is an interesting piece; I enjoyed it. I have a few "celestial" inspired poems as well, and am working on an epic one right now. Kudos!
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