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Space Suit

Trapped in my space suit Tied down to the launching pad Terrorized by the rocket Paralyzed to the surface The cold surface of my skin Basks in the judgmental sun Strapped in my race boot A dyed gown around my chest A hard place and a rock, it Seems I stand in perturbance Fervidness of my kin Tasks my legs to jump the gun My chest strains as my legs race My heart aches at my minds race "When I win I'll pen the pin" But I'd only lose to win a when Internal torment. Eternal Dormant. In turn I'll forfeit to eternal internal scornment

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Date: 4/9/2024 8:00:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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