Soluble

soothing embers’ thirst she pours out her flaming heart dry tears shed her fear

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Susan Ashley

Date: 3/20/2018 6:30:00 PM

An absolutely beautiful haiku Kai. The imagery is rich, deep and poetically superb. Full of passionate emotion! Warmest wishes. ~Susan

Maria Williams

Date: 3/7/2018 8:36:00 PM

Gosh you are so good at these Kai. Never fails to baffle me how you poets manage to convey such imagery in three short lines. Brilliant....Maria

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/8/2018 3:23:00 AM

Hi Maria. The three line thing helps, because my stuff gets too complex with the long format. Many wishes and a Happy Day, Kai

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/7/2018 1:27:00 PM

- Beautiful done, Kai - GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/8/2018 3:22:00 AM

Thank you Sunshine Smile. I appreciate that. Kai