Soft Sigh

soft sigh winter wanes earth breathes ~*~

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Tim Ryerson

Date: 4/14/2013 11:19:00 AM

Perfect...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/13/2013 9:29:00 PM

Thank you Anna, a nice lovely soft image. . Enjoyed, your haiku :-) Always & Forever! GOODNIGHT xox~LINDA""

Jack Horne

Date: 4/11/2013 3:38:00 PM

awesome haiku - love it : )

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/10/2013 4:41:00 AM

Very sparse words and yet I can see the image so vividly. Can almost imagine steam rising from the ground to melt the snow away... cool!

Douglas Fulghum

Date: 4/3/2013 9:43:00 PM

Brilliantly composed, simplicity is the key. I love it, thank you Annalise. :-)

Audrey Haick
Date: 4/4/2013 8:30:00 PM

Thank you too, Doug.

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/3/2013 8:44:00 PM

Ignore Catherine, or whoever it is, because this is a phenomenal write! It says a lot, and it says how talented you are as a poet! You are versatile, you can write several different forms, and do so very well! I look forward to the Earth breathing again here soon! Winter should be letting up finally and Spring will enter! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!

Audrey Haick
Date: 4/4/2013 8:29:00 PM

Thank you Russell..LOL

Audrey Haick
Date: 4/4/2013 8:29:00 PM

Thank you Russell. You're very kind!