Snug

I saw my wife tonight She was on my brother with the words...no... letters... abbreviation of some college plastered on him she kept him warm like she did with me hugging the curves of his body he held her closely appreciative her softness unspeakable caressing him He smiles looking at me breathing her into him as I did her "Thanks bro..." I smiled back Admiring her on him "No problem...it's cold out" Author's Note...inspired by a scene in a movie

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/3/2009 1:21:00 PM

Karena, thank goodness this was inspired by a movie! The images are very vivid, but the actions of disloyalty would be hard for the husband to bear. Very compelling poem! Love, Carolyn

Adell Foster

Date: 3/3/2009 7:31:00 AM

Kudos for a very well written poem. The imagery is quite vivid, excellent tone and figurative language throughout thte read. Thank you for sharing the write so glad that the snuggle was in innocence. :-) Great Writing Karena. God Bless, Always, Adell

Roje Brown

Date: 2/17/2009 11:22:00 AM

i'm impress