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Snow Covers the Lawn

snow covers the lawn looking like a white blanket- - i stay warm in bed

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Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 11/23/2015 6:57:00 AM

Nice, simple and sweet.

Robin Davis

Date: 3/2/2014 11:38:00 AM

Jack short but very interesting. We've been getting a lot of snow here, so I can relate. Thanks for the awesome comment on my Birthday poem

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/8/2011 11:20:00 AM

Ah, memories of childhood spring to mind, Jack. We used to pray for "snow days" so we could be off from school. My mom vacuumed each day at 7 a.m., so there was no way to sleep in. LOL Great entry for Deb's contest! Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/7/2011 10:11:00 PM

I really enjoyed your awesome write! I only wish that I could write as good of a poem as you have here!! Gorgeous Job!!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/7/2011 4:03:00 PM

line 1 GOOD..now don't YOU tell us what it looks like [whenever you say LIKE you are doing it wrong no simile or metaphor or personification in haiku] snow covers the lawn--I pull up my blankets/staying warm..that's more correct..see all fact OBJECTIVE