Snow

When I see the snow It makes me glow When I see snow fall to the floor I want some more It is so cold outside But I still want to snowball fight Oh no! My mittens are lost! How much did they cost? My parents will ground me! Oh poor me! A week without my T.V I must find my mittens! Oh there they are,they are bitten by my kitten! That was so close I want to play more in the snow Look through the window as it falls to the ground There it goes drizzling down I love the snow It makes me glow

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Robin Davis

Date: 9/30/2013 5:30:00 PM

This is very cute and creative. Lots of fun and imagery. Your words take the reader on a snow journey of fun and adventure, nice job

Skat A

Date: 7/9/2013 12:49:00 PM

Ting, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/9/2013 3:03:00 AM

- Hi Ting, a well written poem. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)