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Smiling Waters

The waters ripple Tickled by the summer breeze Chasing rings of joy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/26/2010 12:32:00 AM
Perfect title. Love the thought of those ripples creating smiles. Excellent. Deserving a 7!
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Date: 6/21/2010 5:39:00 PM
Starting to get the idea of haiku. Good write. Thanks ...Ralph
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Date: 6/20/2010 6:54:00 PM
What a delightful view of the rippling water, Larry. This shows a somewhat different side of you. Humor is obviously not your only niche. Excellent haiku! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/20/2010 6:48:00 PM
It's wonderful haiku. enjoyed it
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Date: 6/20/2010 6:26:00 PM
so cute love it!!
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Date: 6/20/2010 5:06:00 PM
I really enjoyed this haiku!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/20/2010 3:57:00 PM
Very serene and soothing.. love constance
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