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sun … glints off sweaty trickles as they plop … plop … little lad’s littler fingers tickling a tide pool’s papery face things of mysterious intention, darting there to here to there … wide eyes wider in amazement tiny thrums quick’ning dividing breaths like swells divide the time and tides … a splash and a grasp, tightening some small watery beast cold-red cheeks blooming wide to parody the dazzled bay grins and giggles to mock the black-backs for this shrimpy monster, squirming is the prize of a wee fist gamboling its way to proffer some mad-mommy shrieks - slimy and squiggly and oh, so wondrous! hunter, home from the hill Ahab and his white sea demon perfectly prideful, invested surety of a silly smile warmed by the sooty afternoon … sun. Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden, June 9, 2024

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Date: 6/24/2024 2:25:00 PM
Seriously! Like when you enjoy a great dinner and it's the total package that just leaves you flooded - that's what this poem does emotionally - leaves you in that moment when ... you were that child
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/24/2024 10:35:00 PM
Oh, thank you so much, Buddy, I’m really pleased you like this one - it’s special to me for just those reasons … the days when all the world was magical! Blessings, Good Friend!
Date: 6/12/2024 8:29:00 AM
Nice... enjoyed this poem and the reference to Moby Dick. I feel for the lad's poor mum. ;)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/12/2024 9:25:00 AM
Thank you so kindly, Eileen, I greatly appreciate your comments! <3

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