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Sky of Fireflies

His sanguine spirit turns every firefly into a star. —Arthur Conan Doyle
Sky of Fireflies Might I return to the night, alone, except for the pitter patter of rain, except for the thunderbolt of fireworks, somewhere in the distance, rather close, yet unattainable, except by foot or engine roar, through my forest and over the hill, beyond the houses, might I return to the night, alone. On the deck, my extravaganza begins, beyond my nose, my fingertips, the screen. In July, a rampant light show, as if stars rappelled just above the human heart. This electrifying dominion, quite unexpected. The earth, moistened and morose. Osmosis of celebration and outlandish spectacle, for an audience of one. Oh! How good God is! Amidst crackles and whistles, the strobes, of an army of fireflies, light up my backyard. Curious as Alice, have I fallen into Wonderland? I have a front row seat sans willows, comets and Chrysanthemums, but the sky over my sodden green moss is the epitome of heaven on earth; His presence in the night.

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Date: 2/21/2025 11:49:00 AM
Back again with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful Fireflies write again. Have a fun/blessed weekend as you write away..................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2025 5:56:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 2/21/2025 3:50:00 AM
I love the alice reference there and how youv painted imagery throughout this , very fitting for the theme of the prompt and i love especially how youve written “close, yet unattainable, except by foot or engine roar, through my forest and over the hill, beyond the houses,” deeply moving! Thank you for supporting my contest. Congratulations on your win
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2025 4:43:00 AM
Thank you so much, Ink! Hugs!
Date: 2/14/2025 1:38:00 PM
Sounds like an enchanted forest. I used to love watching fireflies down by the river. Was amazing to see so many and a great memory with this fine poem. love phyl
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2025 1:45:00 PM
Thank you, Phyl!
Date: 2/12/2025 12:45:00 PM
Enchanting! How playful is God in His love.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/12/2025 1:38:00 PM
I know, right?!
Date: 2/11/2025 7:20:00 AM
Wow this is great. It really drew me in as I read it. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/11/2025 11:23:00 AM
I am so glad! Thank you, Heidi!
Date: 2/9/2025 9:06:00 PM
Fire! Flies! Sounds a lot like L.A. this time of year. ~ Too busy crying to lol.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/11/2025 11:24:00 AM
Yes, we must cry at the sadness but there is also a time for laughter when the world tilts our way. We pray, we live, we laugh, we cry…sigh
Date: 2/9/2025 4:31:00 PM
It sounds wonderful. Great words. I don't think I've ever seen fireflies. Maybe they don't have them in California. :-(
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/10/2025 3:06:00 PM
I don’t know! Hope you get to see!
Date: 2/9/2025 10:43:00 AM
He is always with Kim beautiful write love it hugs Shadow
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/9/2025 11:49:00 AM
Thank you, sweet Shadow!
Date: 2/9/2025 7:28:00 AM
Hi Kim, I've always been a sucker for a good garden/nature kind of poem and this one's well, spectacular! Love the imagery especially "The earth, moistened and morose. Osmosis of celebration and outlandish spectacle, for an audience of one. Oh! How good God is!" Here you've touched a soft spot of mine I'd call sublime.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/9/2025 10:17:00 AM
Thank you so much, Terrell. You’ve touched my heart, likewise.
Date: 2/8/2025 5:54:00 PM
How lovely Kim, I really enjoyed this one from you. Keep on writing and go Bills Josh won MVP that was the least the Cheating NFL could do for our 'star Leader. Go Bills!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/8/2025 7:15:00 PM
I agree! I was so glad for him…go Bills! Thank you!
Date: 2/8/2025 5:53:00 PM
This work is as magical as it is a little haunting. I love the repetition of night and the feeling of what it's like to be alone in a sea of fireflies against black sky. Not too black for God to see through- hugs, dear Kim <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/8/2025 7:15:00 PM
Thank you, Paige! Hugs
Date: 2/8/2025 10:34:00 AM
What a wonderful Fireflies write. As a child we would get them and put in a jar. "Good Luck" Enjoy your weekend...............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/8/2025 7:17:00 PM
I did that a few years back when my grandson was visiting. Like a lantern but then it was sad because we thought the firefly died. I opened the jar while outside and away he flew.

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