Sky

I want to evaporate into the balmy sky. Embrace songs and taste feathered energy. I want to be gray and float heavily to you-- Pregnant with rain and colors of light.

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Robert Warlov

Date: 9/20/2024 7:37:00 PM

All skies are pretentious and what of the rainbow?

Robert Kinard

Date: 1/8/2024 5:06:00 PM

Your poem put me in a better mood.

Daniel Schack

Date: 1/8/2024 12:51:00 PM

your poems have a musical rythym. please see/comment on mine too. be well.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/1/2012 5:57:00 AM

I have truly enjoyed reading your poetry you have posted here at PoetrySoup. You are a very special poet and I wish you the best in your life and with your poetry. Two thumbs up to you Tamra. Love and best wishes always, Carol

P Sheart

Date: 12/20/2009 9:45:00 PM

Hi Tamra, Wow! This is a beautiful poem hun. Thanks so much for your comment on Merry Christmas poetry soup, after your comment I just had to check back. You have a beautiul spirit, heart and much talent. Want to say you can e-mail me anytime hun if you need to talk. So glad you're feeling better!! Happy Holidays to you my friend. Thanks for sharing. Love Light Patty

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/12/2009 12:27:00 PM

me too. really. wish i wrote that myself. thanks for your other beautiful comment on my poem. you are a beautiful soul, and a talented poetess. be well. see you soon. love, shar

James Fraser

Date: 8/9/2009 7:46:00 AM

Lovely poem>>James

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/26/2009 6:56:00 AM

A wonderful personification.....it puts a somber face on nature and the coming rain. nicely done! ~ Carrie

James Knox

Date: 7/26/2009 6:30:00 AM

great poem :)

Bill Doggett

Date: 7/26/2009 5:57:00 AM

Tamra, this is a great poem, full of very unique thoughts,thank you Bill