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Skater and Lake

I glide through the mirroring Lake Lake; so still, so simply, indolently worthless Lake, disagrees, callous feelings candors A vociferous wind refurbishes the was still, still leaves The wind is merely the umbrage at my insult It repudiates my sincere apologies I glide on the pretty and this lake wanders wandering so dumbfounded at a skater's lithe

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/2/2009 9:17:00 PM
Great imagery here, Sajdah !! I feel like it isn't ended though ... smile ... Congratulations on your writing being featured here at the Soup this week!!
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Date: 7/2/2009 8:53:00 AM
beautiful images my dear, congrats on your feature! lots of love madison
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Date: 6/29/2009 6:52:00 AM
congratulations on your poem being featured God bless you from diane
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Date: 6/29/2009 6:38:00 AM
Life's basic principles are reflected in your writings. Amazing grace is here.
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Date: 6/29/2009 3:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/29/2009 1:02:00 AM
Congratulations on this featured poem. Ernilando
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Date: 6/22/2009 11:04:00 AM
The emotion comes through your words in this poem. Much to think about here. Thank you for sharing your this poem with us and for your kind comments on mine. Have a good day! Karen
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Date: 6/12/2009 3:31:00 PM
You know the soft ice, my friend and you know the power of words ... do your thing!
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Date: 6/8/2009 10:25:00 AM
Pretty. I Love These Images. Nice Job. Peace. Jese
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Date: 5/27/2009 1:44:00 PM
Fly, fly away blob blob fish wiii =D jojojo this poem is windy, in a soft manner; the image of the like, shining under the sun, clear morning dome, amazing!! thanks for the experience!!=)
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Date: 5/18/2009 2:00:00 PM
Great work! and thanks for the comments, Welcome to poetry soup!
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Date: 5/18/2009 10:07:00 AM
Welcome to poetry soup, nice work...Raul
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Date: 5/18/2009 9:26:00 AM
Beautiful. I love your choice of words. Thanks for the comment on "Relationships" You helped out with my experiment. Nate
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