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Sixth Sense Seduction

SIXTH SENSE SEDUCTION In ordinary ways in ordinary days I stand before her quite amazed at her lithe form. While reaching up to touch a cloud with naked limbs (it’s all allowed) Her beauty strikes though not to lure; to transform me of that I'm sure. I hear the whispered wind blow through... to once again say its adieu ...in delicate sound, so very crisp upon this newly blossomed tryst like falling leaves that gently touch a waiting heart. While still in trance of blessed bliss I knew that a presumptive kiss would end this convocation. And so in silly awkward glee and truly thinking it was not me I could not I resist; oh won't you see? It was not wrong to hug that tree. CAK 2-14-2013

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Date: 10/22/2013 3:34:00 PM
Oh Wow, I truly love love love this one. You captured me and the final lines are so funny and I might add witty. Your poems are beautiful and I look forward to reading more and more. Lov, Shar
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Allan Koven
Date: 10/22/2013 6:55:00 PM
Shar, you are so sweet. Thank you. Allan
Date: 9/24/2013 4:12:00 PM
...leaves that gently touch a waiting heart... Cerebral!
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Date: 8/22/2013 11:09:00 AM
Yet another delightful piece, Allan. I see why it was featured. Trust me, I am not pandering to your poetic ego lol You can count me as a fan of your work! :)
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Date: 8/11/2013 10:54:00 AM
- Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage "Featured Poem of the Week" - Have a nice day, Allan. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Allan Koven
Date: 8/11/2013 4:13:00 PM
One of first I ever wrote. Seems it still resonates. Thanks for responding, Anne Lise Andresen. Great to hear from you. Allan
Date: 8/11/2013 7:09:00 AM
Good morning Allan, , '''CONGRATULATIONS''' On your featured poem of the week... Have yourself a nice and beautiful Sunday... -XOX- Love Linda
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Allan Koven
Date: 8/11/2013 9:38:00 AM
Love hearing from you, Linda. You know how much I admire your poetry. Allan
Date: 6/27/2013 8:32:00 PM
Nice and playful. I thought it was a very fun read.
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Date: 6/3/2013 10:43:00 AM
Nice one xx
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Date: 5/31/2013 9:14:00 PM
Allan, lovely seduction, enjoyed it.
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Date: 5/31/2013 9:58:00 AM
....this was so good. Thanks for bringing a smile to me! Z
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Allan Koven
Date: 5/31/2013 10:04:00 AM
Thank you for reading. Hope to read your poetry soon. Allan

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