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SITUATIONS-SURFACES

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THESE ARE OPEN(organic) VERSES using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretation unique to the moment

SITUATIONS abandoned in disquiet  intrusions happening awareness paused in    isolated  waves of polite whispering unpacked displayed   released & streamed the hassle   interrupted by seasoned calm as rehearsed SURFACES idealised simplified    uninterrupted fold    inward identically shaped with desire the melancholy lament stimulates   the irreverent twisted & curled rippled disconnected yet discovered scattered in silent embrace of the invisible stillness

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Date: 11/10/2023 6:05:00 AM
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