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The color white, is it truly without shadow's tint? Is there a hue within that to a bird's eye gives a hint? And since the realms of Space are said to be black, Are the white linens of Earth just a terrestial fact? Why do the Arctic's snows hurt and bruise eyes' gentle orbs? And why does pure white reflect that which eager black absorbs? But contrasts of the two defines our abstracted sight, To be amazed by a white cloud and in awe of black night.

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Date: 1/19/2024 6:39:00 AM
The questions in this truly absorbing poem are bound to elicit a medley of responses. The eyes like the mind can be hoodwinked You have composed a scientific poem with deep probes. Well done Howard
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/19/2024 7:05:00 AM
Thank you . It's always good to hear from you.
Date: 12/26/2023 4:49:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your inquisitive side with us through your poetry, Hilda. Well written and thought-provoking, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/5/2024 4:37:00 PM
Thanks.
Date: 11/28/2023 1:57:00 PM
A beautiful, thought provoking poem, that is masterfully crafted. Happy holidays.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 11/28/2023 3:35:00 PM
Thank you. May your holidays be happy.
Date: 11/27/2023 6:23:00 PM
I like the depth of your insights about the refractions of white and black. It's truly remarkable how mind-bending and thought-provoking this topic can be.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 11/27/2023 6:31:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comment.
Date: 11/26/2023 6:43:00 PM
Love your reflections on white and black's refractions. Mind-bending stuff, truly. Huzzah. ~ Gershon
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 11/26/2023 7:05:00 PM
Thank you.

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