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Simpatico

Two opaque shadows. Are baring their souls Enter the fever heat. As molten lava flows. Desire is replete. Simpatico.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 6/26/2024 10:37:00 AM
Thank You, Pangie. This is a rewrite from eight to six lines. What a difference in the response. Sometimes less is more, It seems. Thanks for the encouraging words. As you know well they mean alot. Keep Rolling.XX
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Date: 6/25/2024 2:23:00 PM
Wow, RJ! I really like this! Very steamy, but softly poetic. I prefer amour to trees and mushrooms!! Nothing romantic about hgetting it on with a tree! LOL Pangie R.
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