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Silver Stars

water waltz in wind silver stars splash sway spray squirt flying flamingo

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Karam Misra

Date: 10/13/2020 9:17:00 PM

Beautiful imagery. Every word conjured up a picture. And all those pictures beautifully composed into masterpiece. Loved the poem, Rama. Thank you for it.

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 10/14/2020 8:20:00 AM

Thanks. At times when others praise you feel your poem is indeed good. Thanks for your positive comment. It made my day. Take care, warm regards Rama

V. Deepa

Date: 8/28/2020 2:18:00 AM

Wow..amazing Haiku..I enjoyed it :-) Loved the fying flamingo.. Congratulations on your win.. Keep writing and keep shining.. Take care.With love~Deepa:-)

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 8/28/2020 4:02:00 AM

Thanks Deepa. I appreciate your taking time out to congratulate me. Take care. Warm regards, Rama

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/27/2020 9:24:00 AM

WOW! I admire Congrats to win. Blessing

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 8/27/2020 10:56:00 AM

Thanks Anisha. I appreciate your taking time out to congratulate me. Take care. Warm regards, Rama

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/27/2020 6:49:00 AM

Rama, congratulations on your winning placement, a great haiku with great alliterations and the last line is a vivid surprise!

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 8/27/2020 10:54:00 AM

Thanks for the placement. Enjoyed creating it. Take care. Warm regards, Rama