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Showing All the Signs of Being Neanderthals

I see them most days now in the street, Neanderthal look-a-likes, Who only grunt when I give them a hearty good day, Bent double over their phone, Gripping it like a prize bone Bearing a sharp resemblance to prehistoric man, Who could not yet stand upright, Showing no signs of sociability or co-operation, Traits that sowed the seeds of doom, For that branch of Man-kinds family Tree.

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Date: 4/2/2021 8:48:00 AM
Pitiful, isn't it, David? But, what you wrote is soooo true! This is an important message, but I don't know how THAT generation can be restored to civility.
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Date: 4/3/2021 12:08:00 AM
I don't know either. I am used to the grunts but it is even more sad for their health as looking down like that is not good for posture or general health. Also I am sure it contributes to accidents both in cars and on street. Hope you are doing something enjoyable during Easter break. David in NZ

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