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should i stop loving you, because of your thick eyebrows? or should i stop loving you, because of your tiny nose? should i stop loving you, because of you broad waist? or should i stop loving you, because of your ugly face? should i stop loving you, because of your nasty handwriting? or should i stop loving you, because at bed you're snoring? should i stop loving you, because of your weird habits? or should i stop loving you, because of your misaligned teeth should i stop loving you, because they tell me to do so? or should i start ignoring this, because I LOVE YOU :) An entry in "A Girls Night Out" contest, 1st Place (06-03-14) Sponsored by: Darren Watson

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Date: 6/15/2014 7:36:00 PM
Jeriel, thanks for the reply...Linda
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Date: 6/9/2014 9:30:00 AM
Jeriel, Congratulations, on your awesome winning poem... LUV -LINDA-
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Jeriel Del Rosario
Date: 6/12/2014 3:10:00 AM
sweet.. Thanks Linda :)
Date: 6/9/2014 2:44:00 AM
congratulations.. :)!! sweet endearing writw.. :)
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Jeriel Del Rosario
Date: 6/12/2014 3:09:00 AM
hi olive.. Thanks :)
Date: 6/5/2014 12:01:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem's simplicity and heart. Congratulations!
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Jeriel Del Rosario
Date: 6/8/2014 3:51:00 AM
thanks michael :)
Date: 6/4/2014 9:02:00 AM
A superb poem which deserved its superb win! My hearty congratulations my dear friend Jeriel. Cheers! love and hugs, Leonora
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Jeriel Del Rosario
Date: 6/5/2014 6:57:00 AM
thanks Leonora :)
Date: 6/4/2014 12:34:00 AM
Aww thats nice, congratulations ....Seren
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Jeriel Del Rosario
Date: 6/5/2014 7:00:00 AM
a big thanks seren :)
Date: 6/4/2014 12:34:00 AM
Interesting write, congrats on the win, Jeriel
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Jeriel Del Rosario
Date: 6/5/2014 6:59:00 AM
thank you sir :)
Date: 6/3/2014 11:37:00 PM
Beautiful Jeriel. CONGRATULATIONS! You are a winner... 1st Place win in the contest. You accomplished your goal. Verlena
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Jeriel Del Rosario
Date: 6/5/2014 6:59:00 AM
thanks for the appreciation verlena :)
Date: 5/20/2014 12:41:00 AM
Probably the sweetest poem I read today. :) You brothers are just...amazeballs at sweet poems!!!
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Jeriel Del Rosario
Date: 5/20/2014 7:50:00 AM
thanks for the appreciation jake :)
Date: 5/11/2014 11:26:00 PM
NICE!! Amazing!! How Sweet
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