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She's Just Nagging Again

mother of two boys nagged at dad clowning by pool one dive too many ~ forgive my raised jaded brow 'nag' now aids paraplegic AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted for contest ONE OR TWO TANKA sponsored by RICK PARISE - December 17, 2017

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Date: 12/20/2017 6:57:00 AM
Line, a rather dark well written Tanka. An intense way to get your point across.
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Date: 12/20/2017 10:02:00 PM
A true story I heard a long time ago that always stuck with me. Thanks for your visit, James.
Date: 12/19/2017 2:37:00 PM
Whew, I didn't see that coming. A very effective piece.
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Date: 12/19/2017 2:58:00 PM
Thanks, Richard.

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