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She Is a Keeper

I love you! She said, throwing her arms around me. I was stunned. I had no idea who she was. Or how she got inside my parent’s home. My brother explained. “This is my new girlfriend.” I adored her right away. She loved the house, she loved the parents. She loved their fireplace, she loved their bar room. She was fun, happy, enthusiastic and wonderful! Where did you find this one? I asked him. She is a keeper! If you don’t snap her up, I’ll marry her myself. She never stopped loving things. That was fifty years ago, And she still loves me, my brother, my parents, their new home….. She and my brother are divorced now. He has a new wife, But she still loves him. She loves everything. She loves and loves and loves and loves. She is at my front door now. I am hiding behind the couch, because she might peek in the window. I cannot take any more loving.

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Date: 7/1/2021 12:49:00 PM
This was my biggest laugh this morning! LOL! LMAO! Apparently your brother couldn't handle that much love either, eh?
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/1/2021 9:21:00 PM
Hahahaha I can see you also have met her.
Date: 7/1/2021 11:51:00 AM
Hello Caren, She loves everything?! Wow! that is not true love. Hugs
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/2/2021 10:30:00 AM
Hello Caren, you are just being you. There is nothing wrong with that. Hugs.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/1/2021 9:22:00 PM
Some people do this. Weirdly enough I am kind of one of them
Date: 7/1/2021 12:27:00 AM
TRUE LOVE NEVER BE FADED AWAY; SHE IS STILL A GOOD HEART KEEPER; LET ALL JOY AND HAPPINESS BELONG TO HER~
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/1/2021 9:22:00 PM
Right!

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