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She is like rain, scattered drops but when it falls it's soothing. She is like soil, so hard but keeps your soul holding. She is like fire, which burns but turns you shining. She is contentment, invisible but when in you is pleasing. She is like nothing, when she is not you too are nothing. She is constant, yet comes in goes out being in harmony. She is convoluted, always formed deformed, evolving dissolving in symphony. She is magical, appearing like wonder- blunder, ugly beauty diaphony. She is science, as been experimented observed deduced in cosmogony. She is eternal, around you, in you, is you, present-omni (XX/XY).

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Date: 4/19/2018 10:34:00 AM
This is a brilliant poem Ashok! I've been studying Buddhism with Aberdeen University. Rhoda
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 4/19/2018 3:06:00 PM
Thank you so much Rhoda!!! I am honored with your words. I'm working as IC design engineer. :) Regards, Ashok
Date: 4/7/2018 5:36:00 AM
OMG ! The jority of words and ideas that you have displayed in your poetry is AMAZING ! This is really deep !!! It was worth a read !
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 4/7/2018 8:02:00 AM
Thank you so much Tanisha. I am honoured with your words
Date: 4/3/2018 6:38:00 AM
Wow I would like to be the "she". I really enjoyed this one! :))
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 4/3/2018 10:27:00 AM
Thank you Patricia.... Here the She includes you too.... If you feel it then yes you are the She.... :) :) Thank you so much for your encouraging words....
Date: 4/2/2018 5:31:00 PM
The depth of your poem is incredible! I did a double take it was very well written! Appreciate the share thank you!
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 4/2/2018 7:43:00 PM
Thank you very much Kyle. :) Your words are very encouraging :) :)
Date: 3/29/2018 10:16:00 AM
Fine!
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 3/29/2018 1:51:00 PM
Thank you Mikho! :)
Date: 3/29/2018 2:58:00 AM
Highly original Ashok;-)
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 3/29/2018 7:19:00 AM
Thank you Keith :XD
Date: 3/27/2018 3:57:00 PM
All the similes and metaphors are nothing without you! A wonderfully penned poem!
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 3/27/2018 8:49:00 PM
Thank you Besma! Your words are true.... Ha ha... I saw my parents had a cute fight, papa became bit very angry and mom became sad.... But after few minutes papa was so sad.... Then I got the lines---> She is contentment, invisible but when in you is pleasing. She is like nothing, when she is not you too are nothing.
Date: 3/17/2018 12:49:00 AM
Very lovely... poem Sweet warm inviting Brilliant verse A favorite for me... Write On James
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James Edward Lee Sr.
Date: 4/2/2018 6:10:00 AM
"Right On is just a catch-phrase /slang word originating in the 1970's. Meaning yes, a greeting of agreement to another person.. I've changed it for my use in the poetry forum spelled it Write instead of Right,: means for me an encouraging word to continue composing... James
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 3/17/2018 6:30:00 AM
Thank you very much James!!! "write on James" means?
Date: 3/16/2018 4:09:00 AM
nice poem, any woman would love to be seen in this way
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 3/16/2018 4:16:00 AM
Thank you Renee!!! I am glad you valued it!!!
Date: 3/14/2018 6:53:00 AM
Why She or He? That's Eternal. That's Divine. But I admire each line. Nicely composed. Where do you stay? I have two close associates in your name. Best wishes
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 3/14/2018 1:35:00 PM
It's about a woman. Though can be deciphered for a soul. The last line present Omni XX/XY Tells that the presence of female chromosomexx in male xy.... So I have dedicated this to She. Though I'm from Odisha but I'm staying in Delhi at present.... I'm very glad you liked it and took your time.... Thank you very much...

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