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She Blue

the blue dress she wore the blue words she swore the blue tears she tore the blue baby she bore

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Di11y Da11y

Date: 10/1/2024 2:48:00 PM

Short biography of an interesting woman there. Excellently done, creating a sense of a person so simply...

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/1/2024 11:43:00 PM

I'm hoping he's just wearing blue knitted cardigans - parallel universes and all x

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 10/1/2024 3:17:00 PM

I came up with the last line first and the rest kind of write itself really, with that last line I had a real tragic feeling and the life of this woman, whoever she may be, is a very sad life.