Shall We

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Oh, shall we go just you and I, to watch the black night sky; shall we, my darling go see stars shining, scattered and at last aligning. Oh, but you are gone and home is a decaying place, where once we felt loves embrace; but, now the wind is whining; and vines are twining thick and high. ______________________________ September 2, 2019 Poetry/Rhyme/Shall We Copyright Protected, ID 19-1177-825-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Free Verse or Rhyme sponsor, Eve Roper, Inspiration - Pic #3 First Place

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Eve Roper

Date: 9/11/2019 3:59:00 PM

I sometimes come back to reread the poems and again enjoy how they make me feel. I can see the artist in you when I read your poems. Thank you again.. Hugs Eve

Constance La France
Date: 9/14/2019 7:56:00 PM

Eve, thanks that is the best compliment

Eve Roper

Date: 9/9/2019 5:24:00 PM

Congratulations on first place in my contest, Dear Heart, . Hugs Eve

Constance La France
Date: 9/14/2019 7:57:00 PM

Eve, thank you for another wonderful contest and for my awesome placement

Trevor Mcleod

Date: 9/9/2019 2:02:00 PM

Very nice Wiishkobi Ode. You did a great job. Congratulations on your win. Well deserved. Trevor

Constance La France
Date: 9/9/2019 2:31:00 PM

Trevor, thanks for the compliment and congratulations!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/9/2019 1:02:00 PM

- Both beautiful and sad, D.H. ... a memory ... and a loss - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France
Date: 9/9/2019 1:59:00 PM

Anne_lise, thanks for the comment and the congratulations.

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/3/2019 6:57:00 PM

so beautiful, yet so poignant, one can feel the loss through your words...the destruction emptiness often brings is present...enjoyed this one, great write! :) hugs

Constance La France
Date: 9/3/2019 11:00:00 PM

Sandra, thanks so much for visiting and for the beautiful and nice comment ~