Shadows

I am walking on a road on a calm night Cool breeze is rapping trees Which have fallen deep asleep Street lights are dozing Still hung on poles Moon is playing hide and seek My shadows turn around To look at me from Front – back – left – right With great perplexity As wanna ask Why haven’t I slept yet? What am I looking for?

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Skat A

Date: 3/14/2015 7:52:00 PM

Lalit, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2015 5:26:00 AM

Lalit,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) As I hope one day you will follow and give me a few poetry pointers. We're Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with your New Poet Friend! @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/7/2015 11:44:00 AM

- Welcome to P Soup, with your first poem Lalit - Always nice to meet new "poets" - I look forward to more write from you in the future - Happy weekend :) - // Anne-Lise :)