Serene Love

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we drove the winding road to this remote beach with aquamarine waves crashing . . . roaring now, watching the scene from the car I read . . . as you caress my leg . . . with serene love _________________ July 25, 2022 Poetry/Free Verse/Serene Love Copyright Protected, ID 07-1475-950-25 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Theme chosen D https://www.pinterest.com/pin/578431145904764979/ Written for the Standard contest, Short Verse Inspired By Pictures (40 words) sponsor, Lisa YY, Judged 08/09/2022 Second Place

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/10/2022 4:05:00 AM

Wonderful feeling of love beautifully expressed. You are an expert in it. Congratulations!

Constance La France
Date: 8/10/2022 3:28:00 PM

Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings ~Constance

Bill Baker

Date: 7/26/2022 12:16:00 PM

Matches the picture well, great entry for the contest, Constance. Good luck. Bill

Constance La France
Date: 7/26/2022 3:58:00 PM

Bill, thank you so much for the comment and encouragement, blessings ~Constance