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My art approaches minimalism, sort of pop art style. 

She walked with resolve through her thoughts late last night, Walked in a single straight line, She walked determined to clear it all out, All the colourful shapes in her mind, The shapes that have jumbled the clear and concise, That messed up where her thoughts belong, She cleared up ideas from counterfeit folks, She threw out the thoughts that were wrong, So today she can see the things that matter, The abstract beliefs that she holds, Now she can walk clear and know who she is, As she walks her dependable road, Last night she cleared out, she emptied her past, She threw out the thoughts that were fake, And woke up in a mind filled with beautiful truth, In the minimal world she creates.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/22/2019 5:14:00 AM
It can't be something in the water that produces great poetry in OZ as you don't have much. Mystery to me but a pleasant one. Regards David in NZ
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Date: 8/22/2019 8:22:00 AM
Thanks :) ... ps the bledislo returns here next year, spread the good news
Date: 8/7/2019 8:16:00 AM
I love this. (I need this) xomo
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Date: 8/7/2019 8:36:00 AM
Thanks Maureen.
Date: 8/7/2019 8:07:00 AM
Nicely said, Lewis! Better to clear out all the lies and unneeded past, begin small with a clear mind.
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Date: 8/7/2019 8:35:00 AM
Thanks Kim.

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