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Sedative Sea

The sea is always calling, Reminding Of its cold and salty waves Calming, Soothing with the breeze, Lightly sedating. Until the waves start changing With the wind storming, Clouds thundering, Before life strikes with lighting, While the scene is not yet darkening Leaving me detached, confusing, I wish for the sea to remain calming - Without its chaos entwining, Waves overpowering Silence dissolving and The tide tangling, Again and again reflecting A life in ruins splitting As serenity in a storm is fading. But then it comes again Always calling, Reminding Of its cold and salty waves Calming, Soothing with the breeze… Until the waves Start changing again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/15/2015 11:14:00 PM
A most excellent and descriptive poem about the nature of the sea. I give it a 7!
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Date: 2/15/2015 6:23:00 PM
Describes life so well. 7+
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