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Squalling seagulls sip the morning sunshine, in an eternal war of sea and shore; there is something so haunting in their whine, when a single call turns to a loud roar. In an eternal war of sea and shore, the seagulls- on wind currents soar and glide; when a single call turns to a loud roar, on beaches these birds gracefully walk- stride. The seagulls- on wind currents- soar and glide, such a view of serenity and peace; on beaches these birds gracefully walk- stride, of my lunch, I happily share a piece. Such a view of ~.~ serenity and peace, from graceful to a powerful diver; of my lunch . . . I happily share a piece, the seagulls life is that of- survivor. From graceful to a powerful diver, there is something so haunting in their whine; the seagulls life is that of . . . survivor, squalling seagulls sip the morning sunshine. _________________________ November 29, 2019 Poetry/Pantoum/Seagulls Copyright Protected. ID 19-1204-090-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Seagulls sponsor, Eve Roper First Place

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Date: 12/21/2019 12:04:00 PM
Hi Connie, Congrats on your win! Beautifully done.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/22/2019 2:15:00 PM
Sam thanks for visiting with the beautiful and the congrats !
Date: 12/20/2019 2:02:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Constance
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Date: 12/20/2019 4:15:00 PM
Greg, thanks so much for the congrats !
Date: 11/29/2019 7:08:00 PM
Hi Constance this was very good. you used your mind well. I didnt know this was still going on. As I did mine a while back. Best of luck to you and thanks for sharing this
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Date: 12/1/2019 10:50:00 AM
Greg, thanks for the compliment, I find these Pantoums very difficult to write with the repeating lines it is hard to make the poem make sense, do you find that also probably not as you are such a fantastic writer !
Date: 11/29/2019 4:58:00 PM
Well written Dear Heart. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 12/1/2019 10:49:00 AM
Heidi, thank for visiting and for the compliment !

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