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(turned into a haibun "In My Dream')

sea of vibrant green bamboo trees rattling in the breeze AP: 2nd place 2021 Posted on August 23, 2018

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 8/28/2018 5:40:00 PM

I can see the wind rippling thru the stalks and hear the plants clacking together. Very nice poem.. Thank you for writing it!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/28/2018 7:09:00 PM

Thank you so much, Timothy. Most appreciated.

Warren Doll

Date: 8/24/2018 10:51:00 AM

Beautiful image, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/24/2018 11:25:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit, Warren.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/23/2018 10:13:00 AM

Expert in composing haiku. Congrats.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/23/2018 1:16:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Anisha.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/23/2018 9:45:00 AM

Very nice! Peaceful :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/23/2018 1:16:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit, Heidi.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/23/2018 7:35:00 AM

Sweet! Your haiku blow me away, my friend. This one especially. There I go down the hill, and over the pond like a kite.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/23/2018 1:17:00 PM

LOL - love your visits and comments, Caren.